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Poem about depression

By: naomijane
Mood: Content
Date: Jan 31, 2013
Music: rihanna


So yeah i don't usually share my poetry coz i don't think its good enough, but felt this one had particular significance for DepressionTribe members. Tell me what you think?

 

Useless

 

It's hard to write what I want to say

'Cos the words just rot and fall away,

So with a hole in the bottom, I'm stuck in the same boat as before

And slowly sinking just in sight of shore

I push myself to work so hard,

knowing potentially it could make me worse,

Sometimes I think I'm better off in the back of a hearse

But I know I could never leave behind

The one I've been searching for all this time

I didn’t think that

I would feel like this for long.

But just like always,

I was completely wrong.

 



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January 31, 2013, 9:25 pm

 Naomi, 

 

Love it. 

Love it. 

 

Keep on writing too. Is it a great outlet for you? Love the use of metaphors, lost boat at sea :)



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